Thank you Mommy for teaching me poem writing,
Thank you Papa for teaching me cycling.
Thank you Mommy for giving me good feedbacks,
Thank you Papa for buying me yummy snacks.
Thank you Grandma for teaching me to be kind,
Thank you Grandpa for saying I have a good mind.
Thank you Miss Lau for teaching me piano-playing.
Thank you Mr. Jamie for teaching me performing.
Thank you Gareth for being my friend.
Thank you Auntie Icy for being my Mommy's friend.
Thank you Uncle Paul for reading my writing,
Thank you everyone who makes my life interesting.
5 comments:
See, the online rhyming dictionary is really user-friendly!
Use if more often and write more interesting poems.
Can't wait to read more!
Mommy
Dear Harold,
It's a very nice poem!
It's important to have a thankful heart and not to take things for granted. It's hard but we've got to learn.
Yes, Gareth does treat you as a very special friend. Hope you two can keep the friendship!
Auntie Icy
Dear Harold,
I appreciate this poem as it evidenced not only your pleasure but also your thankful heart.
You're really a lucky boy to have so many kind elders and friends who are all concerned about you.
Love,
Grandpa.
Wow, Harold you could be a great poet one day! Very very boys in primary school can write poems. You must do this again. Another thing I like about this poem is your expressing your gratitude to the people in your life. Not many children these days remember to do that.
Uncle Paul
The main theme of your poem is to thank someone who is nice to you. Good. I think you should your mom and dad because they love you most in the world.
Best,
Ricky
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